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Re: Navigators Volcano Discussion Area

From: Stacie White
Date: 10/13/02
Time: 1:58:32 PM
Remote Name: 65.171.29.252

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Hi Josh, Things look really good. You did a good job. The only thing I see may be that the H>E's have no resources after them. Even if they came as one big paragraph with one resource that source needs to be documented on each paragaraph. There are a couple others that do not have a source. If you can put a source after each paragraph that does not have a source (mainly on the S>E and just a couple (2) on the E>S I believe that this would be correct. If you can not find a source then maybe it would be o.k., but I know that the last event study we did we were told to have a source for each reaction. Sorry to keep on about this, but I really believe it needs it. Other than the documenting the sources for our reactions that have none, it looks complete and good to go, to me. Thanks for the hard work, Josh.


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