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From: Cat
Date: 10/13/02
Time: 10:42:14 AM
Remote Name: 213.1.45.14
Marilou, you have a good introduction. However, i don't think you need to repeat the E>S interactions. Instead they need to be combined into casaul chains. I see only 3 chains, and we need many more. I suggest taking out the single interactions and loking for ways they interact. Such as E>L>A>B> The volcano tears apart and reshapes the land with the explosion as it spews ash, rocks, and gases into the atmosphere. The ash is carried by winds and deposited elsewhere causing damage to crops and other organisms as they are essentially suffocated. The ash and debris is wahed and deposited into water sources causing suffocation to organisms within as well as blocking or diverting water flow and changing the chemical content of the water. The sources would be those from which all the parts come. Hope this helps, I can't really concentrate on it nor sit at the computer for more than just a few minutes. Cat